Friday, 29 November 2013

Feedback from class pitch

From our pitch to class we had some feedback on the ideas of our film, these included;

- "The location of cambridge could be holding your group back as you are struggling to get permissions from everyone for filming in public areas. Maybe consider more local locations?"

- "Make sure the guns you use and props as well, are well known to the local authority as this can cause disturbance if filming outside in a public area."

-  "The narrative is slightly unclear and we are unsure how you can tell that much of a story in a trailer"


- "Narrative needs to be simplified and maybe a sub plot added also?."


- "The name and connotations of CAD - classified and dangerous has been well thought out and is good."


-"Pitch fits the genre of secret agents and was interesting and visually interesting too."


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